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Friday, 29 March 2019

The island of nightmares

2 comments:

  1. Hi Hunta my name is Tylah I go to paroa school, I really like your post I like how its clear and the story is great, maybe next time u could check your Grammar

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  2. Hi Hunta, It's Max from Paroa School here. You're story is really interesting and scary. This story has given me a good idea about a story I want to write about. Maybe you can check out my story once it's done. Next time you can get a spellcheck from a buddy.

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